wearing spectacles and contact lenses.
I doubt sometimes that as I spend most of the time in the school; which is the better and efficient way to wear spectacles or the contact lenses. In some circumstances, nearsightedness people will find it is already a problem causes in their daily life. As a nearsighted I am, for example, I will find out that the contact lenses will cause dryness of the eyes. On the other hand, the “Spectacled” one put more focus on the appearance that matters. I don't like to wear the spectacles with a proper clothing.
In addition of the money expenses aspect, contact lenses need more extra money to spend on, the spectacles will not have the problem of spending extra maintaining fees. For examples like the solution to clean the contact lenses, spectacles will just need a clean Tissue paper will do.
In my final conclusion in both of the variation, to choose the right type of tool to see clearly is the most important issue that which of this will not cause a lot of problems in your daily life. Choosing both will be the best advice that both will be needed in all circumstances and places. I will rather choose the two up to my mood in times.
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"Doubt" is the wrong word here. You want "wonder". While "spectacles" is sometimes used by native speakers to mean "glasses", it's an old-fashioned word. "Efficient" is not an appropriate concept here. The question that you need to answer is "Which is better for my eyes, wearing contact lenses or glasses all day at school?" Both types of lenses allow you to see better, but one may make your eyes more tired.
The sentence should begin with "sometimes": "Sometimes I wonder whether it is better for me to wear contact lenses or glasses at school all day."
Don't use "as" to mean "because". In this sentence, "as" can also very easily be interpreted to mean "while".
Don't talk about whether you are nearsighted or farsighted when you mention that contacts cause "dryness of the eyes". Contacts don't care what your vision problems are.
". On the other hand, the “Spectacled” one put more focus on the appearance that matters. I don't like to wear the spectacles with a proper clothing" are two strangely worded sentences. They should be rewritten as "Contacts don't change my appearance, because no one can see them unless they are very close to me and looking directly into my eyes. Glasses, however, do change my appearance. I don't like to wear them with formal clothing because they look ['dorky'? I don't know what adjective you want to use here]." There is no such thing as "proper clothing".
While your meaning is clear enough, you have a lot of mechanical problems (punctuation and spelling, for example) and sentence structure problems. Your English in this post is not very natural. For example, "In my final conclusion in both of the variation, to choose the right type of tool to see clearly is the most important issue that which of this will not cause a lot of problems in your daily life" is quite strange. You might want to say something like this instead: "I need to have both. Sometimes contacts are fine, but sometimes glasses are better. It depends." And I don't know where "in your daily life" comes from. You're talking about yourself, so it should be "my daily life".
Make your sentences shorter and simpler. Yours are too complex.
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