First of all, I decided to take the writing-class more seriously. And starting to write as a habit daily in my blogs. Although I prefer to have the essay written in papers, but I will try my best to get use to it since all my classmate did the job. I will not find any excuses too often then that.
I got an accident last week. My bike with which I found a big crack in front of the railing wheels cover. Right from that moment,I stood helplessly in front of the man but in anger I starred at him. " What can I do?" I thought for the moment. Soon my instinct responded. I made a request of the payment to get the bike fixed. "Responsibilty" do reacts from his conscience in which he did direct me to the nearest motorcylce-repairment shop. As he realised it was his mistake of riding from the opposite direction of the road. I decided not to be such a mean person to scold any vulgar words. But I believed that "Vulgar" words will poured which it were the immediate reactions that I seldom often did when I got "very" angry.This incident took up most of my memory for the past few days or so back to say that that was all I could remembered. And beacause of that the bike was going through a hard process of repairement . I will not going to talk about the details further more.
In the beginning of the morning, I have no transportation to get me to the school and that writing classe is the first period of the day . I heard that Bill is really angry about that. But I wanted to explain the whole situation but in the end finding that is an "NONSENSCIAL" excuse to make it that way. But I can't really get myself be in the class because the shop opens at 9 in the morning. If I delays the repairement schedule again, I will not able to make the class on time for the whole entire week.
At last, I got my bike well-fixed in the night. I'm glad to see it is okay. "SAFETY FIRST" is the most important issue for a student who lives quite a distance away from the school. For the whole incident that happend, I will be more careful to look out the "CRAZY" rider. And with the kindeness of my friend, Patricia, to give me a ride home today. The story is rather too personnal to talk in class but I believe that I will try to write a better and subjestive topics to share that with my classmates.
" I could do much better each time", I thought that in my mind.
Critical judgement upon the writing process will not be my obstruction of learning as to be a good writer. I hope to hear more comments on my blogs. And I will not be defeated.
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I'm happy to hear that you've decided to take the writing class more seriously. It's to your benefit to treat it seriously. If you do, you might learn something because you will be thinking more deeply about what you write.
"seriously and start(ing) to write" is how you should say this.
I understand your desire to write on paper, but I hate to deal with paper. I always lose one or two essays if they're written on paper.
"get used to it".
"I had and accident last week" is idiomatic here.
"I hit a big crack in front of" is natural English. I don't know what "the railing wheels cover" means.
Who was this man and where did he come from? Ah, I see. He was one of the stupid idiots who rides on the opposite side of the road.
I understand the feeling of having an incident like this bike accident take up all my free thinking time and even preventing me from sleeping. I don't know what you think of, but I usually think about what clever remarks I could have made or how I might have beaten the idiot into a bloody pulp for causing the accident.
I don't get angry when people can't come to class because they have motorbike accidents. All I need is a simple explanation. You have a cell phone, so, please, the next time something unexpected happens, give one of your classmates a call or send me an email or text message telling me what happened. I, too, have skipped classes as a teacher here at STUT because of motorcycle troubles. That sometimes can't be helped. I don't think that a bike accident is a nonsensical excuse. Things like bike accidents are more important than English classes, even if you aren't hurt. You should learn to critically evaluate your excuses. I think that yours is a good one. I'd use it if I had to. And I agree that if you hadn't hung around to make sure that the work was done, you might not have been able to make it to school on your own later last week. Don't be so afraid of the truth next time.
Well, you've written a good essay. There are many errors that I won't bother to point out, but everything is very clear and easy enough to understand. I'm sure that your writing will improve. I hope that your fear disappears. I do become unhappy with students who seem not to care about their schoolwork and who simply occupy chairs and desks and computers in class. That's not being cooperative. That's not learning. That's not studying.
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